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didn't your mother ever tell you
to turn the water off when you're finished?
swivel the faucets so that silver glints
in the incorrect direction and
the porcelain seems that all is right
in a your microcosm world.

but she also said never judge a book
by its cover, and the world is not right
in fact, it's falling apart. it's absolutely
left and we're red lights without a green
turn arrow. i guess the sink is leaking.

there's only so much you can do to stay
friendly to your mother (nature) and
you never flip the switch. clutch my spine
and sigh, "waste not, want not." because
you're not wasting my love.

but you don't want it either.
:icongothiksquirrel:
for the prompt "waste."
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:iconwildfire222:
This was fantastic! I love the theme, it was really interesting.

Again, the ending is really strong and puts a very definite the end to the piece.

I really like the beggining to this one too :) Actually, I pretty much just loved the entire thing.

Great job!
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*Phyllipa Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
That was amazing, I loved it!!
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:icongothiksquirrel:
~gothiksquirrel Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
awww, thanks. [:
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*Phyllipa Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D
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:iconrom-maniac:
"But while I'm brushing my teeth and having so much fun,
I never let the water run."
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~gothiksquirrel Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
ha, i like it. [:
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:iconrom-maniac:
It's from a Barney song. ^_~
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~gothiksquirrel Dec 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
i used to ADORE barney. i do not recall that song, however. ... sometimes i still sing the cleanup song. XD
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:iconrom-maniac:
Pfft. Used to? Not enough dedication. Oh man, I totally forgot about that song until now. I sing Growing and the rainbow song, along with the tooth brushing one that I quoted.
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~gothiksquirrel Dec 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
OH I SING THE RAINBOW SONG ALL THE TIME. i don't know what order they go in unless i sing it. ... roy g. biv is a lie. i don't know this growing song? i shall have to youtube it.
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